New Song Recorded, Feedback?

[Psycho Mythic]

This is a song I wrote for my father about the loss of our mother, let me know what you guys think.

https://soundcloud.com/cody-strickland-3/i-wont-forget

 

[505'sFastestViper.]

Song is goid


Dom
Undefeated on the Internet

 

[VenomTruck]

Just played your song, my wife came out of the bedroom and said "whos that? it sound good!" Lyrics are moving, sorry for your loss my friend. Keep playing man you have talent

 

[Yellow venom]

WOW!! Song is killer Cody!! Very well done!! I like the vid of it that you did also.

 

[Skypilot68]

You definitely have talent and I'm real sorry for your loss...nice song.

 

[Psycho Mythic]

Thanks fellas, that means the world me. My pops still cant listen to it unless hes alone, seems hes spent the entire year trying to forget, just didnt want him to forget completely

 

[VenomTruck]

Listened to mountains too, equally awesome Did you by any chance play for a church band at some point?

 

[Psycho Mythic]

Thanks man, i wrote that one 10 years ago. I played guitar with a church once when i was younger, thats it though. Ive been asked thst a few times haha

 

[kennygene]

Very impressive, thanks for sharing!

 

[VPRPWRD]

The song is really good!!